Although there are areas which can be improved and will need re-shooting, the main area which I feel needs addressing is the final cut in this clip where the model is walking round the corner. It can be clearly seen against the blue hut the words 'Erith boat house' in white. This needs to be removed by shooting from either a different angle or having a close up on the model's face to reduce the backdrop and then remove the writing. Hannah (Filming); Rosie (Editing); Katie (Model)
Your use of the rule of thirds and other framing devices is stronger in this footage. Keep that focus.
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